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TITLE OF THE BOOK : FIRST RATE FAITH AUTHOR : thewackywriters REVIEWER : SAANU
TITLE :
I think the title can be given a different name. I don’t think it is actually suitable. I would actually like to know why you have chosen that title. For now I can’t give any justification for it. So for now I think that the title is not suitable so I will have to for a 5/10.
BLURB:
The blurb is a normal cliche blurb yet it gives a good amount of knowledge of the story. So I am gonna have to go with a 7/10.
STORYLINE:
I like the storyline of a foreign family, a big family and they are getting along with the struggles by using their knowledge for good benefit. It is her knowledge that has bought the family this far. I appreciate that. One could also call Faith a prodigy. I also like how Faith meets Aiko, it states the start of a good romance. For this I will definitely give a 8/10.
VOCABULARY/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION:
The indentation and writing style is just adequate and properly done. No hassle with the punctuation. I would give it a 9/10. Even the language is sweet and simple.
CHARACTERS/DIALOGUES:
I must say you have done an excellent job in putting up the aesthetics as they often show the personality of the character. Faith is simply a sweet girl and knows her limits and manners. Whereas I really admire the boldness of Aiko, as she took the baby steps that blossomed the love between the 2 girls. Faith’s Mami clearly was confused and torn, but I am glad she accepted her daughter. The father is supportive just like how every parent should be. One suggestion though I would prefer if there was more love between Faith and her brother.I would like to suggest that the dialogues which are in a language apart from English. I suggest that you give the translation immediately, so that one can understand the conversation between Faith and her family. I would give this a 8/10.
DESCRIPTION:
The description I have no mistakes to report though her little more description on their living conditions is recommended. I would Give this a 7/10.
OVERALL ENJOYMENT:
I enjoyed this story. I always love a good romance and as being a proud bisexual, made me like the story even more. I am glad that Faith had enough courage in accepting her sexuality, as some would be a little confused, granted even she was. The romance is strong and they even declared their love for each other.
PACE:
I would suggest that you go a little slow on the pace. I like the romance but I think it is going a bit too fast, I am asking you to slow a bit down. It feels like a really fast roller coaster even though your cover suggests that. Nonetheless, a 7/10.
SUGGESTIONS:
I have no more suggestions. I think you should continue what you are doing and best of luck
