I am thinking about re writing this before continuing it. I am not happy with the story, Almost seems like I rushed it. Please give me feed back and also if you would change anything, why
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Their little Mermaid °On Hold°
FanfictionEdward and Bella are on their honeymoon when Ariel washed up on Isle Esme. What happens when Alice calls telling him to come back early and bring Ariel with him? Who does she turn out to be matted too? how does Bella react to having Ariel around wit...
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I am thinking about re writing this before continuing it. I am not happy with the story, Almost seems like I rushed it. Please give me feed back and also if you would change anything, why