kmxoxoxo

I'm so quite here on Wattpad lately. But i haven't missed the big 100k The Alliance has hit. I have read every single comment left on this book and can't still wrap my mind around the fact that so many have enjoyed my writing. This book requires a lot of editing, which I will now be doing very soon. Once again, thank you so much.

wordsandsweets

I just finished reading ur novel, the alliance and I really want to commend your work. I really enjoyed the book. I was hoping u could write another epilogue showing that Zayn was able to pull through and he was living happily with his family, at least, cancer can be managed right? I also think u need to show that his daughter got to know who her real mum is, it is only fair, what do u think? But then again, i must say u are really good. I really enjoyed reading ur book a lot. Kisses

Cassiopeia41

@kmxoxoxo  can the ending be about that she chooses neither but herself first. 
            I mean the falling in low with zayn was little bit fast and unpredictable. 
            I mean till now she was hung up on rizwan. 
            A little detail on zayns infidelity 
            He didn't explain that to aliyah. 
            It was only ayeshas narrative on that part. 
            So zayns clarification I think was needed. 
            I felt like all the emotions just changed in chap.. 
            
            I like this ending . 
            As it ends on a hope that zayn and aliyah believes that he will survive. Leave like that as there is no happily ever after but daily shares of both happiness and sadness.
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kmxoxoxo

Heyyy! Thank u for the lovely comment. U have a valid point, i look back at this book and i now know the ending is not what u’d expect. I maybe writing a new end to this book or a sequel! Thank u once again
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kmxoxoxo

I'm so quite here on Wattpad lately. But i haven't missed the big 100k The Alliance has hit. I have read every single comment left on this book and can't still wrap my mind around the fact that so many have enjoyed my writing. This book requires a lot of editing, which I will now be doing very soon. Once again, thank you so much.

Frenzy_Tt

Hey dear writer. Recently I just finished reading your book The Alliance and I must say it's a really very wonderful story but it could have had the utmost happiness if you would keep Zayn alive. I felt heartbroken when he was no more in Aliya's life. Come on, she already suffered a lot and don't you think she deserves the happiness after all this. I know the book is completed many days ago and I'm kinda exaggerating this things. But I couldn't help it after all I'm an avid fan of story books So instinctively it caught my attention. Umm...will you please reconsider my request and keep Zayn alive? You can rewrite the story or make some changes with this fact. Please don't take it offensive. It's just a request from a fan of your story's and its characters'.

kmxoxoxo

Hey, thanks for the feedback. It's so nice to hear back from my readers. I understand how the ending is slightly disappointing. It's different and unexpected, hence why i've ended the book there. Not everyone gets a happy ending and so i've gone for a realistic finish, which reflects on reality. Not all relationships last. But hey, i might write another story some day with a happy ending.
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