@YourPsychodreams
I read His Control. You need to edit it. There are some contradictory history about Balia's parents and past. Also who was the main villain of the story Pappeteer or Diablo. Are they two different persons or a same one. Was Rocco or Elio involved with Diablo weren't clear. I think you should take your time to read and clear the confusions through editing. Otherwise it's a nice story.
The new update on the dark romance of Leila and Makros is up don't forget to vote and comment ur thoughts about this chapter, thanks
https://www.wattpad.com/1444020000?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=YourPsychodreams
Please don’t make their beefing/distance/hatred last almost the ending part of the novel . I liked “the control” a lot, just those features made it kinda tiring to continue. Trust me you are doing well.
New update girls
https://www.wattpad.com/1440188400?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=YourPsychodreams
New book, new update guys☺️
https://www.wattpad.com/1439144359?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=YourPsychodreams
Hey there! I hope you're doing well. I wanted to reach out and introduce myself – I'm a newbie writer on Wattpad, and I just posted my first book! ✨ It's been an exciting journey so far, and I'd love it if you could check it out and be a part of my writing adventure.
Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/353509283-blessing-in-disguise
https://www.wattpad.com/1407861328?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=YourPsychodreams https://www.wattpad.com/1407861328?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=YourPsychodreams
Any updates on when you will complete his control ?
