Inara2086

Hey everyone. I'm facing a writer's block right now, so the next chapter might not come out as fast. Hopefully, I get over it soon. Sorry for the wait.

CANGEL1915

Hi! @Inara2086. we are paired for our assignment. I would typically message you directly, but... this is the best I can do right now :/. Before I start reading your book (which I'm super excited for!) I wanted to ask if you had any specific chapters you wanted critiqued, as well as anything in particular that you wanted me to focus on as I read. 
          If there is anything I should know about your story before I get started, please let me know! If I don't hear from you before the deadline, i will critique chapters 1 and 2 and give any feedback that I have! 
          I would appreciate chapter's 6 and 7 critiqued, but will welcome critiques on any of the chapters. :) If don't read the before chapters, just keep in mind that if somethings seem unclear (like an intro to a character), they were likely introduced beforehand. My story is an adult fanfiction of the Hunger Games. (If you'd like more information or if you are unfamiliar with that series/movie, then let me know)

Inara2086

@CANGEL1915 Thanks
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CANGEL1915

@Inara2086 I will try to be as helpful as possible in giving you a readers feedback!
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Inara2086

@CANGEL1915 Hello! I'm excited to read your book too. I would appreciate it if you focused on chapters 16 and 17. I'm trying to bring in an emotional quotient and I need feedback on how the readers are perceiving it. It has put me in a little bit of a writer's block as well, so feedback would be helpful. If you have any doubt, don't hesitate to ask!
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talesofhues

Hello Author, 
          
          I have sent you the character cover as requested by you. Additionally I have also sent some book covers. Hope you like it. 
          
          Thank you for following me. 
          
          Also. please do not forget to mention me on your feed and book for character aesthetic.

Inara2086

@non-sensical It's beautiful! Thank you so much, and I definitely will.
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Inara2086

Hey guys. I've been working on Chapter 15 and it'll be out the day after tomorrow. Hopefullyyy

Inara2086

@non-sensical Thank youuu
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Inara2086

@non-sensical Of course, I will
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talesofhues

Hey Author! 
            
            ✍️ Amazing chapters so far! Keep it up! 
            
            Also, I am uploading a book for cover requests. Any requests from you, do let me know by posting on my profile board. 
            
            Thnxx ❤️❤️❤️
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