Dianne

sorry for barging in her  but can u pleas check out my new book 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/370664092-revenge-and-reborn-bts-ff

I just published the story and I'm fixing all the errors you pointed out 

Thanks for the suggestions imma screenshot the comments and re write all the suggestions you said. 

And as I read everything it’s burning so imma start over with more action 

Hey now that you mentioned it the dialogues do seem a bit boring and as I read the story I got bored I want them doing more 

Thanks for the suggestions because it does seem a bit boring 

Hey, sorry to post here  but will you mind giving your few minutes to my story. It's my first story as well. Please leave your thoughts behind as well 
          
          Thank you
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368787023?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=nightlove2088

Can u read my book?

Want a book that makes you blush and cuddle under the blanket? Well, check out this book by @lostlovefairy https://www.wattpad.com/story/357148529-not-my-little-sister

https://www.wattpad.com/1452783210-salzburg-writing-race-race%F0%9F%8F%83%E2%80%8D%E2%99%80%EF%B8%8F