8. The Step-Brother

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Author: alyloves1direction

Description: Lily is forced to move in with her soon-to-be step-mom, step-sister, and step-brother. She immediately has a crush on her step-brother, Harry Styles, and his feelings are mutual. What will happen in this roller coaster of drama, and love? Will their forbidden love work out in the end? Will they end up together and move past their struggles?

Favorite Quote: Don't say we're not right for each other because the way I see it, we might not be right for anyone else. 

Rating: 7/10

Opinion:

This is very cheesy, carroty and rushed. I loved it when I was younger and it really has a nice message despite it's cringy scenes. I think with a little bit of editing and a fix in the plot, this story could once more thrive again. But I definitely loved this, its adorable, it's innocent and sweet. My favorite part is the ending, seeing as I read this in a very difficult time in my life, the message of this story really stuck to me and that's why it deserves to be here. And besides, who doesn't want a sexy step bro? Cheers to the 2013 carrots!

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