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Title: Relevant to Story? Unique? 5/5
Cover: Relevant? Unique? Eye-Catching? 5/5
Genre Relevance: fit in genre? 5/5
Opening: Rare? Leaves you wanting more? Attention grabbing? 8/10
Characters: do they feel real? evoke emotional response? 18/20
Plot: Unique? Well-explained? Intriguing? Any big plot holes? 34/35
Grammar: grammar and spelling mistakes? tenses used correctly? 19/20
Total: 94/100
Comments/Concerns: Nice job writing! You had pretty consistent and good grammar, and your book fit into the humor genre very well. Having read an expanse of books from all different genres and types (including werewolf stories) I did find that as far as parodies go, yours was pretty accurate and used that to provide humor. Keep up the good work!
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Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Genre Relevance: 5/5
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 20/20
Plot: 35/35
Grammar: 17/20
Total: 96/100
Review: Had fun reading your book. Pace is perfect and characters are described so well that they are easy to imagine. Cover is nice. I loved the blurb. Short and simple, giving a proper insight on what to expect inside. I have a suggestion- whenever you want to quote something or highlight a word inside a dialogue use single inverted comma ( ' ) instead of double inverted ( " ) to avoid confusion. In 5th chapter you have forgot to replace the old character's name with the new one's, so just edit it.
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Temples and Tablets: the eyes of the jaguar by victoriaStephan
