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The story was a start, and I say it was a start because it wasn't like a very long chapter. Still, for being a very short beginning of a story, it was very interesting, and it definitely was creative and really brought you into the story, and you're like, oh my God, this is amazing. So, I can't wait to see what the author does with this story.
Originality: 15/15
it definitely was a story I was not expecting. It definitely was an exotic story. And I'm not saying that in a bad way, but the way that the author starts writing it, you can tell that it's very exotic, but it's very original because the way that they're doing it is not like over the top ecstatic, but it's a perfect mixture of passion, love, and everything in between.
Storytelling: 15/15
When it comes to this part, the section, I feel like there is a story and a connection between both characters; you get to really feel and sense that when they are writing the story, which is something I can appreciate once again. This author definitely knows how to storytell.
Character: 10/15
You don't really get a sense of the character development right now because they go straight into the passion and lovemaking, as I will say. I'm pretty sure you will later in the story, but for now, there really wasn't much to go off of when it came to the characters.
Story Flows: 15/15
I did not see any errors sentence structure or grammar mistakes.
Cover Design: 15/15
The cover represented the story very well.
Final Thoughts:10 /10
Once again, this author really has a sense of pride to make deluded when it comes to writing their stories. It's like they either do their research or they're just really good at writing stories, and that's something that I can appreciate as a reader because the way that they're writing their stories really brings the audience in and makes them want to continue to read to find out what happens next. So, this author should be really proud of what they're coming up with and how they are writing it. Because for me, as a reader, I am. I am so intrigued and so invested in these stories that I cannot wait to see what happens next, especially with this one. This one just threw me in a loop, and it's not bad. It wasn't a good way, so I can't wait to see what the future holds for both of these stories.
Chapters I read:1
Total points:95
Summary of the book:
This context contains profanity, violence and also sexual content, and so on, which may be sensitive to young readers or sensitive persons. So, I hope you'll be reading at your own risk and kindly skip if you're uncomfortable.
AUTHORS WARNING
Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.
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